Friday, June 27, 2008

Chapter 2

"Daddy can we stop and get candy?" Romeo asked Jon from the backseat. "Maybe later okay kiddo?" Jon said looking at Romeo through the rearview mirror. "but were hungry!" Jake told his father. "how hungry are ye?" Jon asked Jake giving glances back to them. Jake and Romeo looked at each other and mumbled to each other for a minute. "very" Jake replied "lots" Romeo told him. Jon saw a McDonalds. "Okay once we pick of Stephanie we'll go to McDonalds how about that?" Jon said as if he was making a deal. "McDonalds!" Jake and Romeo both shouted.

When they got to Stephanie's school to pick her up Jon saw a boy trying to chat her up. Jon watched her for a few minutes. After about five minutes Jon said "Jakey go get your sister I don't she saw us here..." Jake got out of the car and ran over to Stephanie. Stephanie walked over quickly. "Hi Stephanie!" Romeo said dlighted to see his big sister. "hey meo" Stephanie said smiling back to Romeo. Stephanie looked over at the guy and then looked at Jon. "Dad can we go now...please?" Stephanie asked Jon. "uh yeah sure" Jon said starting the engine. "McDonalds now daddy!" Romeo informed Jon. *shit we gotta pick up the dry cleaning and stuff too maybe i'll ask Steph to mind Jake and Romeo while I get the stuff done for Dot* Jon thought.

Five minutes later they pulled up outside McDonalds. Jon put on his shades and baseball cap. "Okay c'mon" Jon said getting out of the car. "one minute dad!" Jake called from the back seat. Jon looked at Jake, who was putting on a baseball cap and shades. "okay ready!" Jake said trying to open the door, it wouldn't open for him. "this side lil dude" Jon said making sure Romeo wasn't going to run out onto the road. When jake got out he saw Jon had his hands in his pockets, so he did the same. Just then Jon saw Romeo starting to run. "go hold Steph's hand" Jon said to Jake, then Jon ran after Romeo. Romeo looked back and saw Jon coming after him, he giggled and kept running. Jon saw he was running for the door of McDonalds so he let him run, but Jon kept running after him. "dad..." Stephanie called Jon turned around "yeah hun?" Stephanie looked over at these two people with Bon Jovi t-shirts on and were walking over. "Steph you take Romeo and Jake as far as the bench there" Jon said pointing to a bench which had a table too. Stephanie did as her father told her.

2 comments:

richiesambora said...

Hey there!
I just found this story or better to say the first 2 chapters of a story that I would probably like.

I love the way you describe Jon as a dad.
What is it about Jon's and Dot's relationship?
Are they really still in love with each other? IMO it's strange that they didn't have sex for 7 months!!!! ;-P
I hope you gonna post more of this story.
~Andy

bethbj80 said...

The scene of Jon forgettin the boys to drop Steph off school was very funny lol.

Like the story I hope you post more soon =)

Beth